So, the expected has come to pass. The CCR is upon us and I
am having issues
I have spent the past few days working on my CCR, initially forming
a script, which I will post along with the Creative Critical Reflection, and
then recording the audio I needed to send to the computer to download.
I recorded that audio I would input into my CCR on the iPhone
app, Voice Memos. This was a convenient and effective method of recording audio
as I was able to take it into my room or any other quiet space and record the
necessary audio. The app also provides the possibility of recording over audio.
This meant that if I was recording fairly long audio clips and I happened to
mess up, I could simply stop the recording, scroll backwards in the audio and
record over my mistake and continue the recording.
This is how the app looks when recording over existing audio – the white lines being the existing audio and the red lined being the new audio
This revelation came a bit late, seeing as I had deleted around 90 audio clips where I had made a mistake before realizing that this was a possibility. Overall, I took 53 audio clips to put into my CCR.
This is just the beginning of the list of Voice Memos I took for the CCR
AVS Video Editor logo
Nonetheless, this was an easily overcome, although tedious,
hurdle. But more problems awaited with the video editing software that I was
relatively new to, AVS Video Editor. I had edited with this software previously
for preceding projects, but the CCR is so far the longest video that I have
edited.
It had an interface that was pretty simple to navigate.
Everything was well laid out and easy to access, Problems only began to sprout
when I started to input images and audio.
I quickly found that placing audio underneath video did not
result in any issues, but if you placed video or images over audio, then the
audio would be split apart. The same thing occurred whenever I shortened or lengthened
a video or image over audio.
This became especially problematic in the middle of the CCR,
when timing began to become important. I placed images to correspond with what
I was saying in the audio and had to time them accordingly. Without being able
to adjust the timing of the images with the audio under it, I would need to
move the audio aside before adjusting the image and then put the audio back in
place. This was much more time consuming of a method.
This is an example of what would happen to the audio when an image was placed over it
This required a lot more patience and time than if I was
able to adjust the image over the audio.
Another problem that I encountered while working with the
AVS Video Editor was the glitchy nature of the editor. There were multiple
times when vital parts of the editor refused to work, like the all-important
undo button. Another issue that would arise with the editor was that it would
jump back to the beginning of the timeline whenever I would place a new image
or video into the program. These frustrating occurrences would require me to
close out the program and reopen it, taking up more time.
These setbacks made a lengthy project even lengthier.
Nonetheless, I’ve been able to get everything input, which
has become easier overtime as I have become used to the process of moving the
audio, adjusting the video and replacing the audio. I’ve got a bit to go, but EVERYTHING
has almost come to an end.
The light at the end of the tunnel (you know, the metaphor
that I’ve used a few too many times now) has finally come into arm’s reach. It
wasn’t easy; it actually required a lot of work. But we’re almost done.
As previously stated, I sent all of the sound clips off to
Ben, so all that he needs to do now is input them all into the opening. After
that and any minor tweaks to the sound that may need to be made, we’ll have our
final cut! Our group project will finally be complete!
But that’s not the “final stretch” I’m talking about. My
final stretch towards completing the group part of the project was finishing
the sound. As of now, I am officially done with our group video project
Now, I move onto the Creative Critical Reflection, better
known as the CCR. This is the last part of our project, meant to help us “reflect
upon [our] work, using digital formats such as director commentaries,
slideshows with voiceover, podcasts, Prezis or screencasts” according to my
teacher. This is the last big part of our project, holding nearly as much
importance as our title sequence.
In this CCR, we need to answer 4 questions:
How do your products use or challenge
conventions and how do they represent social groups or issues?
How do your products engage with the audience
and how would they be distributed as real media products?
How did your production skills develop
throughout this project?
How did you integrate technologies – software,
hardware and online – in this project?
To answer these questions, I’m planning to do a sort of “director’s
commentary” which will require me to mess with some video editing software that
I have only scarcely dealt with previously. This will require a bit more
research and a lot more ranting in my blog posts.
Anyway, this process will start shortly, so expect some
troubles ahead.
Today’s experience with recording and editing sounds was
less difficult than the previous time, fortunately for me. I’ve been getting
the hang of recording the sounds and have been picking more accurate items to
make the sounds I hope to record.
Bed Rustling
When recording these sounds, I occasionally
showed my dad the audio I had captured, just like with the water drip. When
revealing the “bed rustling” sounds I had captured, he believed that these
sounds sounded too harsh, like the first water drip I had recorded, and
suggested I rerecord a softer sound. To do so, he grabbed a bed sheet from
storage and we stood out in the living room, moving and shuffling the sheet to
give the right sound. Using this method, I captured a much more desirable sound
and recorded three different variations.
Air Conditioner
This one was by far the easiest to capture. It
only took one take to get right. I simply held the bottom end of my phone (the microphone
end) upward towards the vent that my air conditioning was running through. With
it, I recorded a 15-second-long clip of just the air conditioner running, which
wasn’t difficult to record. It should also be long enough of a sound clip
seeing as this background ambient sound probably won’t be loud enough to notice
a loop in the sound.
Pickup and Set Down of Picture Frame
Capturing this sound required a bit of ingenuity. Picking up and setting down an actual picture frame did not give the desired sound as I had hoped. The part of the picture frame on the back that keeps the picture frame stable did not give a strong sound. Besides, it was hard to set the picture frame down in time with the opening and have it make a strong sound. The sound of the picture frame below was not in time with the title sequence.
I instead went ahead and used a portable speaker that we had lying around the house. This had a more sold base and allowed for a much better sound when it came to picking up and setting down the speaker.
Now, this seems like a lot less that I recorded, but in
reality, these were the ones that I deemed necessary out of a large amount of rejects.
There were a lot of takes that I simply deleted on the spot because they were
out of time or didn’t sound right. And some sounds I even went as far as to
edit, but then ended up scrapping. These will be detailed in a later post.
I also spent the majority of this time, approximately 4 hours,
editing the sounds I took yesterday and the sounds I took today. Recording sounds
only took up about 1/3 of the time spent on audio. Besides, editing took less
time than yesterday thanks to the beautiful art of “getting the hang of it.” I better
understood the software and could better edit the sounds.
So I’m finally done and will send the sounds off to our editor
– Ben – soon, meaning that we are finally coming to the end of our project.
Sound is a pain. Especially when you don’t know how to work
the software (AVS Audio Editor) to edit those sounds.
That’s what I’ve learned over these past 5 hours.
Add this together with having to accomplish this by yourself
in as short a period of time as possible and we have:
Stress! And Exhaustion!
Well, that’s enough complaining, I guess. I just had to vent
for a bit on the frustrating experience that is – recording and editing sounds
in your house while also editing them on software you have scarcely used. My
sound is far from silent and making it silent enough to record diegetic sounds
was pretty difficult. But it had to be done and done it was.
I won’t relay the events of 5 HOURS of recording and editing chronologically as this would result in long, confusing post as my work flow is anything but linear. I jump from task to task in no given sequence and that would probably be very difficult to follow in text. Besides, structuring this like the “Re-shooting (Everything) – Day 1 and Day 2” posts will help with clarity and section the important details into separate posts that come later. So, I’ll be talking solely about how I recorded each sound for each day and discuss the struggle of editing in a later post.
Anyway, transitioning into talking about recording the
sounds, I used the rough cut to time many of my sounds. To make sure that some
sounds matched up with the timing of the actual clips, I would watch the
blocking and then make the sounds according to the movements of Lionel.
Water “Bloop”
This took a lot of recording to figure out. I had initially decided to let the water drip onto the bottom of the sink and capture that sound, since that’s what would “technically” be happening in the film.
However, when I showed this to my dad, he found the sound to be too harsh. He advised me to make it sound more like the expected “water drip” – the deep “bloop” that occurs after the water droplet hits a body of water. To accomplish this, I had the droplet fall into a cup full of water. The sound I attained was much more desirable.
Footsteps
This one baffled me. It was simple, but not simple at the same time. I quickly discovered that footsteps on carpet don’t make nearly enough sound to capture, so I moved to tile. However, bare feet coming directly off of tile does not sound appealing. In reality, it actually sounds pretty gross
So, I made the decision to put socks on and walk on the tile. The sound became instantly better. Unsure of how the sounds would far when added to the opening’s soundtrack, I recorded three variations. Although the differences are minute, since we were not directly communicating on the audio, I felt that these would give the editor choice and allow him to see for himself which worked better.
Bed Rustling
This one was probably the weirdest to record. This sound was supposed to be for when Lionel is moving in the bed and ultimately leaves the bed. Unsure of how to best capture this sound, especially without a second person, I resigned myself to – are you ready for it? – shifting and swiveling around on my own bed. It was actually pretty sad. I probably spent the most time recording this sound, as Lionel spends a decent amount of time shifting around on the be in the opening and it’s difficult to get the audio to sound right when recording it by yourself. Not to mention, my bed creaks a lot and I had to be careful not to get this in my recording.
Nonetheless, I still sent myself four different variations of the bed rustling that I planned to edit.
Hands on Bed
This one was taken along with the bed rustling
sounds. This sound was meant for the part in the second half of the opening where
Robert puts his hands on the bed to lean over and glance at the fluorescent light
on the other side of the bed. This one was much simpler to capture. I felt that
the creaking of the bed would work well for this one.
This doesn’t seem like much as it not only doesn’t include
the time spent trying to edit these sounds but also the time spent deleting the
sound clips that I messed up. I deleted at least 15 takes for each variation of
diegetic sound I kept.
It seems that we’re going to have to almost completely redo
all of the sounds due to our ignorance of how to incorporate sounds into our film.
In the rough cut, our editor, Ben, went ahead and included the
majority of the sounds into our opening by finding sounds from the Internet. He
effectively placed these with the according sounds and added them as diegetic
sounds – sounds that occur within the film.
Our group saw no problem with this initially, seeing it as
one less task that we would have to accomplish by ourselves. Besides, there was
no rule that we weren’t allowed to take such sounds for the Internet, right?
Apparently, there was, and we just didn’t know about it.
My group was showing our rough cut to our teacher, Mr.
Engle, when he asked us about how we recorded our sounds for our film. After Ben
responded, relaying that we took most of the sounds from the Internet, our
teacher gave a disappointed look. He then revealed the Cambridge rule, that all
diegetic sounds need to be recorded by the group themselves.
Needless to say, all of our hearts dropped immediately,
letting his words sink in. The end of the project had just moved that much
farther from our grasp.
The light at the end of the tunnel seemed that much more
unreachable.
That’s a little dramatic, but you get my point. At this
point in the project, I didn’t think that we would experience any large setbacks,
seeing that we have everything filmed and in the editing software, but here’s
another hurdle we must face. And by ‘we’ I mean ‘me,’ seeing as I volunteered
to oversee the production of sound in the film. Ben just decided to do me a
favor and input it while he was editing for our convenience.
Unfortunately, that means we’re almost back to square 1 with
sound, and I’ll have to create all of our diegetic sounds from scratch and edit
them all myself to send to Ben.
I have to record a new dripping sound, rustling sheets, footsteps,
AC ambient sound, the sounds of the bed being pressed down and the sound of the
picture frame being picked up and put down.
Oh, well.
At least there are a few semi-silver linings to this
situation
Ben did record the sound of the clock ticking in
the beginning of the opening and the curtains moving himself, so I don’t have
to rerecord that. I guess that a plus.
The same group that I am currently working with previously
did a project, a “music video,” together. Before the music started in the clip,
my group included a part that did not have music and therefore had diegetic
sounds that we recorded input. This experience has given me a bit of insight
into how to go about recording these sounds.
Hopefully, this experience will make the process go a bit quicker and be a bit less complicated than expected. However, I have a feeling that there will still be struggles
The rough cut that we produced this time around had much
more of what my group had initially planned for our project.
This rough cut is much closer to a final cut than a rough
cut, due to the inclusion of sound and precise editing. This may be part of why
it seems so much better, but it is also largely due to the plot elements and
props that we were able to include in this new rough cut.
In the previous rough cut, many of the props seen in this
one are not present, such as the picture frame, flowers and computer. Although
this doesn’t seem like much, especially since we omitted some props, like the
red cloth, this has a large impact on the clarity of our story.
For example, from the picture frame, the audience now
surmise that Lionel and the girl are close and can assume who is following him
without seeing her face. This was not present in the previous rough cut and, as
a result, the audience was not given any clues as to who she was. Viewers are
now presented with this bit of information in the opening for them to hold on
to as other questions and mysteries begin to show.
I will talk about the importance and impact of props in a
later post; this one is to detail what we need to alter to reach our final cut.
Don’t get me wrong – the opening is phenomenal. I extremely
proud of how the clips came together and how Ben’s editing brought the title
sequence to life.
Nonetheless, there are still alterations that can be made to
make the clarity and poignancy of our project that much stronger. I have
already notified Ben of these changes that hopefully can be made.
Robert jumps back after opening the curtain on the dummy in the wheelchair as he attempts to leave his room, before calming himself down. After the crash and shadow of running feet, Robert opens the curtain again and closes it at the sight of an empty wheelchair. The camera remains focused on the top of his head before cutting to a wide shot that he eventually walks into. I felt that the opening should reveal Lionel’s second, larger reaction before he walked back to the opposite side of the room. There’s a reaction clip that Katelyn filmed of him falling back into the bed after opening the curtain. I think that this bigger reaction might work better as it might add to the impact of the empty wheelchair and give Lionel a more realistic reaction.
When Lionel walks into the adjacent room with the old lady silhouette, the fact that the lady is suddenly gone and there is no one in the bed is largely glossed over. If we can, I’d like to see if we can use the over-the-shoulder shot we got of him looking into the room paired with a musical sting to emphasize the fact that the figure is suddenly gone before he walks into the room.
I’d would also like to try to slightly alter the sound design. I really like the musical stings that were added to the opening and the small pauses and black screens placed in between the final action at the end; I feel that these were really effective! However, I’d like to try and replace the dripping with a more “echo-y” dripping sound that it’s much more notable and ominous sound. I would also like to try and alter some of the diegetic sounds so that they sound more natural. Some of the sounds don’t sound like they come from the world of the film.
These are the three main things that I hope to alter and improve within the rough cut. More minor details might be changed later on, but these are the essential components that need to be adjusted to aid the continuity and clarity of our opening as well as make sure the creepy scenes have the proper impact on the viewers.
Having taken around 170 different clips to choose from during filming, we should have a lot of different options to choose from when decided what to replace in our rough cut.
As previously stated, our school is currently on Spring Break and my group has been unable to physically meet up. Actually, I am currently out of town. My group has only been able to communicate over the group chat that we created in the social media app, Snapchat. We had recently been discussing our editor’s progress on the new rough cut that had been in the process of being completed over the break.
Ben had told updated us briefly every now and then over the
break about his progress. One big thing that he discovered was an application
that didn’t degrade the quality of our clips when converting the files taken on
the iPhones from m4a files to mp4 files. This was a large accomplishment as the
lowering quality of our clips when Ben downloaded and converted the files to
put in his editing software was a large problem we encountered in our first
rough cut.
I had even aided him in putting the clips in order and helping
him overcome some speed bumps with the placing of clips. We had not only
revised the plot several times shortly before filming, but we had filmed the
scenes out of order, meaning that it was slightly confusing at time to get them
in the right order and understand what was happening in some of them. Although
it took longer as I was not physically there with Ben and conversation took place
over text, we communicated effectively and understanding was achieved.
I had recently asked him how the film was coming since then and he had revealed to us that he was finished and the video was rendering. Shocked that he was so close to finishing, I wasn’t ready when he sent us THIS over email:
I was not only immensely shocked, but also wildly impressed!
It had turned out even better than I thought, with Ben adding musical stings
and a title card that I hadn’t even thought was possible with the technology we
had!!
Of course, it’s still a rough cut and there are things we
need to revise, but I’ll leave this post in positivity, commending our editor
for not just a job well done, but a job superbly done! I am exceedingly more
proud and excited about this rough cut compared to our last one.
Well, it was evident that we didn’t want the film to be
without music and we weren’t going to be making the soundtrack in the film
ourselves, so I took it upon myself to begin the search for the music we would
use.
These posts have become pretty backed up thanks to the rush to produce the films and I haven’t seen an opening to post about the music, so why not now. This was, of course, settled a little while ago, but it’s better to talk about it now than never, especially since Ben in currently editing the film. As stated in the previous post, Katelyn and I gave him the flash drive with all of the clips to edit them together in Son Vegas Pro 13, as described in my post “Technology (in General).”
We’re currently on Spring Break and won’t be able to meet
due to conflicting schedules, meaning that the editing is mainly left up to him
for a while. So I thought that since I wouldn’t be directly interacting with
the opening for a while, it was a better time than any to catch up on some details
that were previously skimmed over.
When dividing roles when creating the group at the beginning
of the year, I was quick to call creating and finding the sound that we would
use for the film opening. Having taken band for all three years of middle
school, I was very familiar with the sharps and flats, the crescendos and decrescendos
of music and how they affected listeners. I felt that I would be able to have a
keen ear for the music we should use and be able to pair it up with the feel
that we were trying to achieve in the film opening.
I immediately searched horror type music and listened to all
kinds of creepy melodies created by synths and sound effects that created an
image in the minds of the listeners and sent a chill down their spine. It had
to be instrumental, that I was sure of. The issues that I began to have with
the “horror music” that I was searching for, was that it didn’t fit the feel of
what we were projected for out opening.
Songs like this one were better suited for traversing
through the forest at night, with a stalker following the protagonist. These
songs were better at making the audience fear the protagonist’s current
situation.
This was not the goal of our film opening. We wanted to have
Lionel’s awake in the hospital confused at his surroundings, unbeknownst to him
that he is being followed the entire time. The protagonist was not planned to
be feeling fear at all throughout the opening, instead a sense of confusion and
melancholy. A more somber melody with creepy undertones was what I was looking
for.
A talented pianist that uploaded all sorts of piano pieces
to his YouTube channel, from depressing to downright terrifying, King’s songs
played within a range that I could pick from that might our film.
He had so many good pieces. Sometimes, I was tempted to use
a song that he had made simply because I enjoyed it, but had to reign myself in
and remind myself what I was looking for.
After searching through his impressive collection of songs,
I finally settled upon three that were especially striking. From the Dark Piano
series: Deranged, Liar and Psycho.
These were all very similar, but very different at the same
time if you listened closely. They all told different stories.
Of course, the one that you didn’t have to listen all that
closely to was “Deranged,” which is the loudest and fits its title to best,
with its erratic chords and harsh notes. This had a certain appeal and subtly
fit with our protagonist, Lionel’s, current state of mind. However, it didn’t
fit well enough.
Although, after presenting the three options to my group
members two of them said that they like the song “Deranged” best, after a while
I felt that it somewhat clashed with the plan for the title sequence. All of
our scares and spooks were planned to be subtle and Lionel’s demeanor stoic. I
felt that a harsh, violent soundtrack behind this scene would be unintentionally
jarring and confusing for viewers. I decided against this choice.
“Liar” was next. It was the first song that I had found and
what put me on the “Dark Piano” track in the first place. It had so many interesting
notes and tunes that were soft and subtle, yet poignant. I felt that this
playing softly in the background would help portray the struggle within the
protagonist – somber, yet desperate for answers. This was what I had initially
hoped for us to put in out title sequence, until practicality clashed with creativity.
There weren’t enough lulls in the song to sustain any
transitions should we plan to cut the song and play it again at a different
interval that fits better with a different section. There were many pieces in
this song too that clashed with the somber tone of the opening. In the end,
though, I simply didn’t think it fit as well as “Psycho.”
“Psycho” was the last song I found and it surprised me how
much I liked it. I at first thought it was boring, having been presented with
the harsh tune of “Deranged” and many intriguing sharps and flats of “Liar.” It
was also very long and I wasn’t sure if I wanted to listen to 17 minutes of the
song in its entirety. Nonetheless, once I started listening intently, I unconsciously
listened to the song all the way through.
There was even more subtlety than that of “Liar,” possessing
small changes in tune and key that was sometimes a smooth transition, like a
wave, and other time jarring, like a rollercoaster. These changes embodied that
of the psyche of a psychopath, constantly changing, nearly inscrutable. And to
top it all off, the song still held a somber and soft tone with creepy
undertones, like a brewing storm; calm and quiet, although we know it is a facade,
and that something mysterious and dangerous is lying beneath. Something that the
person may not even be able to uncover themselves.
I felt that this fit perfectly with not only the feel of our
opening, but also the story. I discussed this adamantly with my group. We will
be using “Psycho” in our opening, and although I doubt that all that I felt
when listening to the song can be felt in the few seconds that we might play
the song, I know that it’s a perfect fit.
I decided to wait until we were done filming to make this
post since revisions to the plot were still occurring during filming. There was
not a concrete plot until the very end.
The plot of the opening has changed more than I thought
possible, honestly. Although I will not be making another “official” script for
this final opening, it’s difficult to keep up with our plan of action without
at least a synopsis of what our final plot is. For this reason, I feel that the
plot should be cleared up at least one last time with a semi-detailed overview
that’s close to a script. Also, you can be sure that this is the last revision
of our plot since we’ve finished filming now and have no desire to go back and
re-film.
I’m going to have a bit of fun with this, by the way and get
a bit descriptive writing-y in this overview, so it’ll be kind of like an
actual script and kind of not.
The final Plot
There is an insert shot of a green clock propped up on a
will, its red hands ticking as the seconds pass by. We are then presented with
a faucet, dripping slowly in the foreground and we see a character lying on a bed
in the background. He is Lionel. Dressed in a hospital gown, it seems like he
was admitted into the hospital.
He begins to stir as he hears the dripping faucet, looking
over to the source of the sound before leaning to his left to reach over and
turn it off. He returns to the bed, facing upward as his confusion shifts from
the dripping sound to his surroundings. Lionel sits up in his bed and looks once
again to his left, noticing the strong silhouette of an old lady lying in a
hospital bed plastered to the curtain. The curtain seemed to be separating his
room from hers.
Although still confused at his surroundings, Lionel decides
that he should at least explore to begin to understand where he was. He swings
his feet off his bed, standing briefly in front the silhouette before strolling
over to the other side of the room; there is another opening to the curtain
that he can exit through. Upon reaching that side of the curtain, Lionel
quickly opens it, anxious to exit the hospital room only to be met with a dummy
sitting in a wheelchair directly outside.
Lionel jumps back, startled at the sight of the dummy, who
he mistook to be a person. He takes a moment to calm himself, realizing that he
only saw a dummy. However, directly after he calms his nerves, Lionel hears a
crash behind the curtain before seeing shadows flash beneath the curtain. He
opens the curtain once more, very apprehensively. Upon opening the curtain
again, he sees an empty wheelchair. He jumps back in shock, realizing that the shadows
he saw beneath the curtain were the feet of the dummy scurrying in the opposite
direction.
Deeming that that exit it now unsafe, Lionel walks back to
the other opening in the curtain, from where he can see the silhouette of the
old lady. He peeks into the room, attempting to see if the lady is asleep so
that he might sneak into the room unnoticed. To his surprise, he opens the
curtain to find the room empty. The lady that was supposed to be in the bed is
no longer there.
Although perturbed, Lionel’s attention is caught by a
picture frame lying on a counter in that room. As he walks over to it, he
notices that the picture is of him and a mysterious girl he does not recognize.
As he continues to scan the disturbing room, he notices a fluorescent light near
the floor, glowing on the curtain at the other side of the hospital room. He
moves towards it, curious of its source.
As he does so, he feels that he is being watched. As he
reached the other side of the bed, Lionel turns to his left, looking at where
he previously was to find nothing. He could have been sure that someone was
there.
He continues to descend, looking at what he now sees is a
computer. The screen’s light had been projected onto the curtain. A document is
open displaying rows of words. Lionel picks it up to read and decipher it.
Unbeknownst to him, a dark silhouette is now projected on the
curtain he has his back to, looming over him. It is oddly shaped like the girl
in the picture frame.
Lionel continues reading the document on the on the computer
as the silhouette opens its arms wide, sneaking up behind him without a sound.
Before Lionel can notice her presence, the silhouette grabs Lionel aggressively,
dragging him backwards. In shock, Lionel drops the computer, unable to fight
back against the surprise attack.
The audience can then see the computer in Lionel’s absence. The document screams “I SHOULD HAVE BEEN THERE” in bold, all caps lettering. We are left to wonder who this document belongs to as the screen fades to black.
There were many things accomplished in this shoot that
required us to get creative and think ahead. A few things you already know
about:
The lighting of all of the curtains
The “out-of-order” filming
Figuring out how to best direct Robert (Lionel)
The plot (revisions)
However, there were other things onset that we either had to
take some time to figure out or we plan to rely on movie magic to bring to
life:
Movie Magic
The Light on the Other Side of the Bed:
In our opening, we plan to show Lionel walking into the
opposite room with the dummy laying on the bed and once he steps foot into the
room, the dummy disappears. During filming, we took a shot were Lionel looks
across a now empty bed to see a light on the other side. This is found out to
be a computer. Unfortunately, a computer could not produce such a bright light
on an already brightly lit curtain, so we instead laid the LED lantern light
that I brought and put it in place of the computer instead. This gave the desired
glow on the curtain that was visible to the audience.
Dropping the Computer:
During the revisions to the plot, I thought that it would be
creative to use the Word Document repeating, “I Should Have Been There” to
distract Lionel from the silhouette creeping behind him and to be the last
thing the audience sees. To make it all the more dramatic, I thought that
having Lionel drop the computer at the end would be the best course of action.
However, the floor was tile and we knew that we most likely weren’t going to
get it right in one take.
As stated in the previous post, my dad allowed me to bring
two computers, one broken, one functional. We first had Robert walk to and pick
up the functional computer, with the screen displaying the document. We then
get the shot of Katelyn’s silhouette standing behind Robert’s figure, who is at
this point holding the broken computer, but the screen is facing away from the audience.
After Katelyn grabs Robert, he begins to drop the computer and the action is
planned to be carried out from a lower angle, where the audience will still
only see the back of the computer. This creates the illusion that we are still
using the same computer throughout the clips.
Behind the Scenes Decisions
Talking to the Actor:
This was probably the best way to direct Robert. While
simultaneously giving him thoughts to be running through his head while acting
to have the appropriate emotion portrayed on his face, I found that directing
his motions were also best to help with his timing. During the filming of our
first rough cut in the motel, I realized that Robert, while acting, was not conscious
of the length of time he was using to act out certain portions. This was of no
fault to him, since he was going through the motions that he thought were most
natural. However, in our case of only having two minutes for out opening, we
need effective, concise acting. Although I didn’t do it for every shot, for
some shots where the timing of his actions were important, I talked him through
it, especially since the audio from the videos is going to be cut out in
post-production.
Take this clip for example.
After lying back down on the bed, I talked Robert through
the timing of looking around and sitting up in the bed to slow his actions down
so that they don’t seem rushed, but also make sure that he doesn’t lie down and
look around for too long. This project is a large balancing act.
Shooting from Different Angles:
There were many times that we would just shoot from two
different phones at once in order to capture the same action from two different
angles. This will hopefully make it easier to stitch the clips together in
post-production. However, this could not always be the case because of group
members being occupied in other roles onset (ex. Actor, holding the light,
etc.) or because of the shots overlapping, causing the person filming from a
different angle to be caught in the other person’s shot. However, should we
have decided to film step by step and have Robert do only the actions he was
required for the specific clip we were filming at the time, continuity of his
movements could have become a big issue.
To combat this, I primarily had Robert run through the
entire motion of what we wished to film through all of the shots up to a
certain point. For example, we took shots from above Robert, after he laid back
in the bed to capture his confused reaction to his surroundings before he sits
up in the bed. Of course, these shots could not be taken simultaneously, so we
had to take them at different times. However, during both shots, we had Robert
run through the entire motion, from turning off the faucet, to him lying down
on the bed to him sitting up to look at the silhouette in the room next to him.
This motion was ran through many times from different angles to conserve continuity
and to make our editor’s job easier.
Below you can see one the master shot of the room that the
first half of the opening is planned to take place and the movements I am
talking about.
You can see this action in the previous aerial shot, as well
I believe that these onset decisions will making post
production easier and further increase our title sequence’s quality.